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The poem 'Carpet Weavers, Morocco' by Carol Rumens, from her 1987 collection, describes young girls weaving carpets. It explores themes of childhood labor, religion, tradition, and the passage of time, reflecting the cultural and social fabric of Moroccan life, especially in rural and Berber communities where this is a traditional female craft passed down through generations.
The poem alludes to the weaving of Moroccan pile carpets, where artisans create Tufts of wool by knotting them around warp threads, forming a luxurious pile. The children likely work on vertical 'hop leas' looms, raising their bench as the carpet grows, as described in the poem.
The poem should be understood through the lens of cultural relativism, recognizing that practices like child labor, while potentially seen as exploitative in Western contexts, are often tied to cultural identity, economic survival, and heritage preservation in Morocco. The speaker's tone balances observation with subtle commentary, encouraging a nuanced interpretation.
The poem consists of four three-line stanzas (tets) in free verse, utilizing the natural rhythms of speech. Most lines are end-stopped, mirroring the distinct layers of knots in the carpet, creating a sense of measured progression. The enjambment in one line reinforces the theme of the inexorability of time.
The carpet is a key symbol, representing cultural heritage, religious devotion, and communal work. Its journey from loom to mosque highlights how artisan labor is bound to tradition. Rumens uses vivid imagery and figurative language, such as similes ('like television') and metaphors ('The Garden of Islam'), to evoke the weaving process and its cultural significance.
Rumens uses simple, direct language to describe the weaving and the children's experience, mirroring the tactile nature of the craft. Alliteration, though used sparingly (e.g., 'fingers fly freeze and frame'), reinforces the themes, particularly the stillness and continuity of the weaving process.
The poem opens with 'The children are at the loom of another world,' instantly positioning them in a unique cultural context different from Western readers. Their 'oiled and black' braids and 'bright' dresses suggest grooming, dignity, and vibrancy. The metaphor of their 'assorted heights would make a melodious chime' portrays them as harmonious and unified, akin to a wind chime creating music through collective effort.
The children watch their 'flickering knots like television,' absorbed in their task, a simile comparing their focus to Western children's engagement with TV. The metaphor 'as the garden of Islam grows, the bench will be raised' likens the carpet to a vibrant garden, emphasizing its beauty, connection to life, and spiritual significance. Gardens symbolize Paradise in Islamic culture, linking the carpet to its sacred purpose as a prayer mat.
Once finished, the carpet travels in a 'Merchant's truck' to a mosque. The repetition of 'will' emphasizes the inevitability and ritualistic nature of its journey. Described as 'deep and soft' and yielding 'when heaped with prayer,' the carpet gains spiritual significance, elevating the children's work from simple labor to a holy act, an offering to the mosque.
The final stanza returns to the children in the 'school of days,' a metaphor suggesting learning through experience and work rather than formal education, consistent with cultural roles. The image 'from their fingers the colors of all that will be fly and freeze into the frame of all that was' powerfully links past, present, and future, highlighting the continuity of their role, their labor as an expression of identity, and their connection to an established tradition that will continue after them.
Rumens' poem offers a vivid portrayal of carpet weaving, focusing on the children with a non-judgmental, observational tone. By highlighting the rhythmic and ritualistic nature of the work, she invites readers to appreciate the skill and cultural significance of the craft, exploring cultural contrasts without imposing Western values onto the Moroccan children's experience. The poem celebrates tradition and continuity.