How to write the Synthesis Essay for the AP Language and Composition Test.

For the conclusion, avoid simply restating your thesis or introducing new information. Instead, summarize the argument you've built and the connections between your points. The goal is to provide a final takeaway that reinforces your sophisticated argument. Don't waste time trying to write a 'fancy' conclusion; focus on a clear and concise summation of your developed argument.

Sophistication in commentary refers to developing a complex argument with multiple perspectives. This means moving beyond simple support and exploring nuances, counterarguments, and implications. Consider how a source might disagree with your argument, and address that disagreement. This shows a deeper understanding and a more complex thought process. Connecting your ideas to larger concepts (class concepts) can also elevate your essay's sophistication.

The synthesis essay is like a mini-research paper where you engage with provided sources to synthesize information into your own argument. You are given several sources (usually 6-7, with a mix of visual and written) and a prompt to address. Your goal is to select at least three sources and use them to support your argument, rather than just summarizing them.

The sources for the synthesis essay can include textual articles, charts, graphs, photographs, historical documents, and even political cartoons. It's crucial to identify the main points and arguments within each source and understand how they relate to the prompt. Remember, you're not just reporting on the sources; you're using them to build your argument. Each source is a tool to reinforce your thesis.

The core of your synthesis essay is your own argument, or thesis. You must develop an informed and independent perspective based on the sources. The essay isn't about agreeing with a source just to agree, but about using sources to support your unique viewpoint. Often, students develop an emotional attachment to their argument, which can solidify their perspective.

A common mistake is simply summarizing the sources. Instead, you need to use specific details from the sources to support your argument. Always cite your sources, even when paraphrasing, as this is a test of academic research skills. Do not just quote extensively; explain how the quote or information fits into your argument.

A sophisticated synthesis essay connects sources to each other. Show how sources support, contradict, or qualify each other. Think of the sources as having a conversation, and you are explaining that conversation to the reader. This involves finding relationships between the arguments presented in the sources rather than treating them in isolation. A good way to show this 'conversation' is to explicitly state how one source relates to another in your commentary.