MASTER ENGLISH WRITING: How to Correct Thesis Statement Problems

Understanding the Thesis Statement00:01:28

A thesis statement is the anchor of an essay, usually appearing at the end of the introduction, and functions as a guide for the reader by presenting a clear argument and structure.

Problem 1: The Announcement Thesis00:02:45

Avoid using phrases like 'this essay will discuss' or 'I am going to talk about.' These are considered informal for college-level writing; instead, state your argument directly.

Problem 2: Lack of Parallel Forms00:03:31

Ensure all items in a list within your thesis use the same grammatical form (e.g., all nouns or all gerunds) to maintain logical flow and clarity.

Problem 3: Lack of a Clear Argument00:05:08

A thesis must present an arguable point, not just a factual statement. It should communicate what the reader will learn or what specific position you are proving.

Problem 4: The Overly Long Thesis00:06:03

Overloading a thesis with every single sub-point makes it cumbersome. Learn to generalize your supporting points to keep the statement concise while still providing a roadmap for the essay.